From Venmark International, a company that specializes in writing product releases, comes a spot-on list of the things that engineers do wrong when they try to write their own press releases.
You can read the whole thing, and download a PDF of the article here. But here's the list. Uuuurgh! It makes my editor-skin crawl.
2. Including too much information. Designing a product requires limits and a clear sense of space requirements. A press release is similar. You must restrict your presentation to about 200 words. Further, keep in focus that a product release is about a product: what it is, what it does, how it does it, where you get it, and what it costs. It is not appropriate to put quotations from the president or another person in a product release. Product application stories, however, are different because the benefits from the use of your product are often qualified by a statement from the actual customer.
3. Lack of respect for marketing profession. Engineers must appreciate the fact that marketing today is as much a science as it is an art. As such, there are certain “generally accepted principles” that need to be adhered to. On the science side, for example, product releases need to be brief and cannot tell the whole story about a product. What’s more, any performance claims should be quantified and substantiated. For example, if your product is compact, list the dimensions. If precise, indicate a measure of precision in the form of a tolerance or some other quantifiable data. Don’t be timid here. You can always say that a claim depends upon configuration.
4. Misunderstanding that a product can be newsworthy without being new. An older product can be upgraded or can be totally new to a different market segment. These new applications represent something newsworthy to a new audience. Also, a product may have different features that are of interest to different audiences. For example, paint can be easy to apply, chemical-resistant, and yield a hard finish. Separate product news releases and different media lists can be developed featuring each characteristic.
5. Believing the more information you include, the more value you receive. Nothing could be further from the truth with respect to press releases. The fact is: most editors are seeking problem-solving information for their readers. Generally speaking, the more specific the problem being solved; the better the publicity coverage will be. In the above example, if you focus on a hard finish, you are solving a problem relative to durability or scratch resistance. Moreover, the sales inquiries will reflect that interest. In other words, you know what your prospect’s problem is and can arm yourself to solve it.
6. Underestimating the importance of a professional photograph. When preparing a product news release, the old cliché, “one picture is worth a thousand words has never been as apt as it is today. A phenomenal photograph that is congruous with the message being conveyed will reinforce your message. More importantly, it will provide an editor with great content. As the editor of Plastics Auxiliaries & Machinery wrote to the author, “Perhaps you can use this situation to make a point to your client regarding what can be done by producing a gorgeous photo of a fundamentally plain product.”
7. Not believing publicity will work for your product or service. This is plain crazy! Publicity will work for any product for which there is a “legitimate need.” That said, I’m not certain what the legitimate need was for “Beenie Babies,” but, they were very successfully introduced using publicity only! If fact the most successful products were all introduced using publicity. The Apple Mac was introduced in 1984 with a legendary publicity stunt by Steve Jobs who had the computer introduce him! The Microsoft Tablet, Vista Software and numerous other products were also introduced with publicity. If there is a need your product or service fills, there will be an audience interested and, therefore, publications, websites, and blogs available to satisfy that interest.